they say of the Acropolis, where the Parthenon is

i feel like i can not write a full concise five sentences without repeating myself or changing subjects. if i am successful in my goal, when i go back to read it i think it just looks like a jumbled mess. it is not enticing and nobody wants to read it. i find myself thinking that the things that i write are only good when they are visually pleasing.
when i used up all my good words i resorted to good judgment. bad call.

when he said you might read this, i got nervous. now i hesitate like i promised i never would.